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Imagine that you are doing a project on how people communicate with each other. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

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Type of activity

Number of people %

Smartphones

95

Computers

65

Tablets

55

Visiting each other

25

Line-phones

10

  

  

Essay 2022 Sample 06

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on how people communicate with each other.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;
—   draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on communication in people’s life.

 

 

 

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It goes without saying that communication is a very important part of human life. A good working device provides people with opportunities to get maximum pleasure from this process. The current project focuses on ways people interact with each other.

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The information provided in this bar chart is about ways of communication between people. As it is evident from the chart the majority of people, accounting for more four quarters, use their smartphones for interactions. The next popular way of talking is using of computers and tables. The figures are 65% and 55% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just few people use line-phones, only 10%.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost ten times more people use smartphones than line-phones. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 10%, communicate through computers and tabs.

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The chart clearly illustrates that people mostly use electronic devices for communication. The first and the third activities might cause some damage for their health. One of them is sight damage. It is a serious problem since it might cause wearing glasses or having a sight correction surgery. One of the probable solutions to this problem is doing an eye gymnastics. Thus, exercises for eyes would certainly sharpen one’s sight. другие проблемы >>>>

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To sum up, communicating through electronic devices is a priority with the majority of people. In my personal opinion, they have a lack of personal communication. Although talking on a phone or any other gadget gives almost the same feeling as if it is in person, it cannot yet substitute personal interaction completely. Also, doing eye gymnastics improves people's health, namely, it removes eye tension and sharpens their sight.

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1

make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1. (Topic sentence, предложение, вводящее в тему)

2. Цель проекта + перефраз

It goes without saying that communication is a very important part of human life. A good working device provides people with opportunities to get maximum pleasure from this process. The current project focuses on ways people interact with each other.

2

select and report 2–3 main features;

1. Утверждение по теме

2. Комментарий на первую диаграмму

3. Комментарий на диаграмму.

The information provided in this bar chart is about ways of communication between people. As it is evident from the chart the majority of people, accounting for more four quarters, use their smartphones for interactions. The next popular way of talking is using of computers and tables. The figures are 65% and 55% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just few people use line-phones, only 10%.

3

make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1. Сравните крайние величины

2. Сравните близкие величины

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost ten times more people use smartphones than line-phones. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 10%, communicate through computers and tabs.

4

outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;

1. Вводная фраза

2. Обозначьте проблему

3. Обоснуйте проблему

4. Приведите решение

The chart clearly illustrates that people mostly use electronic devices for communication. The first and the third activities might cause some damage for their health. One of them is sight damage. It is a serious problem since it might cause wearing glasses or having a sight correction surgery. One of the probable solutions to this problem is doing an eye gymnastics. Thus, exercises for eyes would certainly sharpen one’s sight.

5

draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on communication in people’s life.

To sum up, communicating through electronic devices is a priority with the majority of people. In my personal opinion, they have a lack of personal communication. Although talking on a phone or any other gadget gives almost the same feeling as if it is in person, it cannot yet substitute personal interaction completely. Also, doing eye gymnastics improves people's health, namely, it removes eye tension and sharpens their sight.

 

 

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