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Imagine that you are doing a project on where people go on holidays. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

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Type of activity

Number of people %

travel abroad 

71

travel around the country 

61

going to dacha

51

visiting friends

30

staying home 

15

  

  

Essay 2022 Sample 05

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on where people go on holidays.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;
—   draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the role of classical music in teenagers’ lives.

 

 

 

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It goes without saying that choosing a place to rest is an important task for people. Properly chosen places provide travelers with opportunities to get maximum rest and a lot of positive emotions. The current project focuses on where people go to on holidays.

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The information provided in this chart is about travel places that people usually choose. As it is evident from the chart that the majority of people, accounting for more than four quarters, go to travel abroad 71%. The next popular places are travel around the country and going to dachas. The figures are 61% and 51% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just a few people do stay home, only 15%.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost five times more people travel abroad than stay home. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 10%, travel around the country and go to dachas.

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The chart clearly illustrates that people mostly go somewhere far away, mainly abroad. Visiting foreign countries might cause problems with getting sick. One of them is CoVid-19 infection. This virus might bring some serious problems since it has horrible side-effects like big damage of lungs and blood vessels. One of the probable solutions to the problem is vaccinations and wearing masks. Thus, precautious would certainly protect people’s health. другие проблемы >>>>

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To sum up, traveling far away from own home is the favorite thing for a majority of people. In my personal opinion, people should spend more time traveling around their own country because it has a lot of beautiful places to see. It helps a person to know their own culture and history better, thus becoming a more cultural person.

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1

make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1. (Topic sentence, предложение, вводящее в тему)

2. Цель проекта + перефраз

It goes without saying that choosing a place to rest is an important task for people. Properly chosen places provide travelers with opportunities to get maximum rest and a lot of positive emotions. The current project focuses on where people go to on holidays.

2

select and report 2–3 main features;

1. Утверждение по теме

2. Комментарий на первую диаграмму

3. Комментарий на диаграмму.

The information provided in this chart is about travel places that people usually choose. As it is evident from the chart that the majority of people, accounting for more than four quarters, go to travel abroad 71%. The next popular places are travel around the country and going to dachas. The figures are 61% and 51% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just a few people do stay home, only 15%.

3

make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1. Сравните крайние величины

2. Сравните близкие величины

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost five times more people travel abroad than stay home. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 10%, travel around the country and go to dachas.

4

outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;

1. Вводная фраза

2. Обозначьте проблему

3. Обоснуйте проблему

4. Приведите решение

The chart clearly illustrates that people mostly go somewhere far away, mainly abroad. Visiting foreign countries might cause problems with getting sick. One of them is CoVid-19 infection. This virus might bring some serious problems since it has horrible side-effects like serious damage of lungs and blood vessels. One of the probable solutions to the problem is vaccinations and wearing masks. Thus, precautious would certainly protect people’s health.

5

draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the role of traveling around your own country in the life of teenagers..

To sum up, traveling far away from own home is the favorite thing for a majority of people. In my personal opinion, people should spend more time traveling around their own country because it has a lot of beautiful places to see. It helps a person to know their own culture and history better, thus becoming a more cultural person.

 

 

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