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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

What is the main problem large cities in Zetland face

Number of respondents (%)

traffic jams

44%

too many migrants

21%

industrial pollution

18%

high population density

11%

high crime rate

6%

 

  

Essay 2022 Sample 11

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on what problems large cities in Zetland face.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with life in large cities for teenagers and suggest a way of solving it;
—   conclude by giving your opinion on why young people prefer to live in large cities.

 

 

 

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Undoubtedly, large cities have a lot of problems.The purpose of my project is to study the troubles that citizens in Zetland face in urban areas. I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to use them in my project.

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As it is evident from the table, the majority of respondents, accounting for more than one third, consider traffic jams as the main problemThe next factor is too many migrants. The figure is 21%. Surprisingly, very few people are concerned about high crime rate. The figure stands at 6%.

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Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost four times more citizens in Zetland care about traffic jams than those who worry about high crime rate. Industrial pollution seem less important than too many immigrants. 

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The table clearly illustrates that traffic jams mostly is the main factor that troubles Zetlanders. However, some problems can arise with life in large cities for teenagers. One of them is heavy traffic which makes commuting difficult. One of the probable solutions The possible solution is to ban private cars and introduce more buses on city roads. Thusit will guaranty a better traffic. другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data given in the table, it can be concluded that different factors affect well-being of the city. In my opinion, young people prefer to live in large cities because they have good educational and job opportunities in megapolises. All in all, life in big cities is exciting but it can be dangerous at the same time.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtedly, large cities have a lot of problems.

2

(перифраз) 

 

The purpose of my project is to study the troubles that citizens in Zetland face in urban areas.

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to use them in my project.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

As it is evident from the table, the majority of respondents, accounting for more than one third, consider traffic jams as the main problem.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

The next factor is too many migrants.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The figure is 21%. 

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, very few people are concerned about high crime rate. The figure stands at 6%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost four times more citizens in Zetland care about traffic jams than those who worry about high crime rate.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Industrial pollution seem less important than too many immigrants. 

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The table clearly illustrates that traffic jams mostly is the main factor that troubles Zetlanders. 

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise with life in large cities for teenagers. 

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them is heavy traffic which makes commuting difficult.  

4

(решение проблемы)

 

One of the probable solutions The possible solution is to ban private cars and introduce more buses on city roads. Thusit will guaranty a better traffic.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data given in the table, it can be concluded that different factors affect well-being of the city.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, young people prefer to live in large cities because they have good educational and job opportunities in megapolises. 

3

(обобщение)

 

All in all, life in big cities is exciting but it can be dangerous at the same time.

 


 

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