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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

Type of activity

Number of people %

cats

85

dogs

75

birds

40

hamsters

35

snails

10

  

  

Essay 2022 Sample 10

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on what pets people prefer to keep.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;
—   draw  a conclusion giving your personal opinion on importance of keeping pets.

 

 

 

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It goes without saying that pets are a very important part of people’s lives. Having pets provides people with a lot of positive emotions and as a result it improves their health. The current project focuses on types of pets people like to take care of.

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The information provided in this bar chart is about different pets that people like to live with. As it is evident from the chart the majority of people, accounting for more than two quarters, keep cats and dogs. The next popular types are birds and hamsters. The figures are 45% and 40% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just only a few people keep snails, only 10%.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost five times more people keep cats than those who keep snails. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 5%, keep birds and hamsters.

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The chart clearly illustrates that a lot of people keep dogs. It might cause a problem with walking them nowadays. If government runs a lockdown because of the coronavirus, people might endanger their health by walking their dogs. One of the probable solutions to this problem is to wear masks and not to gather with other dog owners. Thus, following such rules one can avoid of getting infected. другие проблемы >>>>

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To sum up, having pets is a good way to relax and have a lot of fun. In my personal opinion, positive emotions that result from communicating and taking care of pets improve people’s health. Although keeping pets is fun, it requires a lot of responsibility, especially for those that need to be walked daily. Also, it was proven by scientists that having a pet at home reduces the possibility of a heart attack, calms people minds, and make their lives more cheerful.

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1

make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1. (Topic sentence, предложение, вводящее в тему)

2. Цель проекта + перефраз

It goes without saying that pets are a very important part of people’s lives. Having pets provides people with a lot of positive emotions and as a result it improves their health. The current project focuses on types of pets people like to take care of.

2

select and report 2–3 main features;

1. Утверждение по теме

2. Комментарий на первую диаграмму

3. Комментарий на диаграмму.

The information provided in this bar chart is about different pets that people like to live with. As it is evident from the chart the majority of people, accounting for more than two quarters, keep cats and dogs. The next popular types are birds and hamsters. The figures are 45% and 40% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just only a few people keep snails, only 10%.

3

make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1. Сравните крайние величины

2. Сравните близкие величины

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost five times more (сравнительная конструкция) people keep cats than those who keep snails. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 5%, keep birds and hamsters.

4

outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;

1. Вводная фраза

2. Обозначьте проблему

3. Обоснуйте проблему

4. Приведите решение

The chart clearly illustrates that a lot of people keep dogs. It might cause a problem with walking them nowadays. (проблема). If government runs a lockdown because of the coronavirus, people might endanger their health by walking their dogs. One of the probable solutions to this problem is to wear masks and not to gather with other dog owners. (решение проблемы). Thus, following such rules one can avoid of getting infected. (возможный эффект)

5

draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on importance of keeping pets.

To sum up, having pets is a good way to relax and have a lot of fun. In my personal opinion, positive emotions that result from communicating and taking care of pets improve people’s health. Although keeping pets is fun, it requires a lot of responsibility, especially for those that need to be walked daily. Also, it was proven by scientists that having a pet at home reduces the possibility of a heart attack, calms people minds, and make their lives more cheerful. (дать пояснение, почему я так думаю)

 

 

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