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Imagine that you are doing a project on what people do on the Internet. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below).

Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on

the subject of the project.

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Essay 2022 Sample 01

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on what teenagers do in their free time (2022)

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;
—   draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the role of sport in the life of teenagers.

 

 

 

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It is a common fact that the Internet has become an integral part of modern life. It allows people to communicate, do researches or even find friends. The current project focuses on the activities that people are involved in on the Internet.

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The information provided in this pie chart is about time spent on some Internet activities. As it is evident from the chart, the majority of people, accounting for nearly one third, use social networks. The next popular activities are playing games and accessing music. The figure are at 28% and 18% respectively. However, the least popular activities are making purchases or booking. The former makes up 8% and the latter stands at 2%.

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Comparing the data given in the pie chart, it becomes obvious that accessing to films or music is twice as less popular than using social networks. Also, time spent on on-line shopping is 4 % more than that spent on booking.

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The pie chart plainly indicates that social networking websites are in demand. The excessive amount of time spent on social networks can cause some problems. One of them is addiction. It is a serious problem since addicts experience difficulties with socializing in real life. One of the probable solutions to the problem is learning time management. Thus, people would spend less time on social networks.  другие проблемы >>>>

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To sum up, the Internet provides users with a great number of activities, social networking is one of them. In my personal opinion, social networks play a significant role. They offer many services and help users to connect with their friends and share opinions with likeminded people.

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1

make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1. (Topic sentence, предложение, вводящее в тему)

2. Цель проекта + перефраз

It is a common fact that the Internet has become an integral part of modern life. It allows people to communicate, do researches or even find friends. The current project focuses on the activities that people are involved in on the Internet.

2

select and report 2–3 main features;

1. Утверждение по теме

2. Комментарий на первую диаграмму

3. Комментарий на диаграмму.

The information provided in this pie chart is about time spent on some Internet activities. As it is evident from the chart, the majority of people, accounting for nearly one third, use social networks. The next popular activity is playing games. The figure stands at 28 per cent. However, the least popular activities are making purchases or booking. The former makes up 8 per cent and the latter stands at 2 per cent.

3

make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1. Сравните крайние величины

2. Сравните близкие величины

Comparing the data given in the pie chart it becomes obvious that accessing to films or music is twice as less popular than using social networks. Also, time spent on on-line shopping is 4 per cent more than that spent on booking.

4

outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;

1. Вводная фраза

2. Обозначьте проблему

3. Обоснуйте проблему

4. Приведите решение

The pie chart plainly indicates that social networking websites are in demand. The excessive amount of time spent on social networks can cause some problems. One of them is addiction. It is a serious problem since addicts experience difficulties with socializing in real life. One of the probable solutions is learning time management. This way people would spend less time on social networks.

5

draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the role of sport in the life of teenagers.

To sum up, the Internet provides users with a great number of activities, social networking is one of them. In my personal opinion, social networks play a significant role. They offer many services and help users to connect with their friends and share opinions with likeminded people.

 

 

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