Задать вопрос

 

 

 

ВСЕ СОЧИНЕНИЯ 2022 ГОДА >>>>

Imagine that you are doing a project on what means of transportations people use. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

Type of activity

Number of people %

metro

95

trolleybusses

75

trams

70

cars

50

bicycles

10

  

  

Essay 2022 Sample 09

ege 2

Comment on the following statement:

Project on what means of transportations people use.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;
—   draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the importance of riding bicycles.

 

 

 

pir 1

linking words 1

soch 001 001
It goes without saying that moving around is a very important part of people’s lives. Moving around provides people with opportunities to feel freedom, to work, and to communicate. The current project focuses on ways people move around.

soch 001 002

The information provided in this bar chart is about different means of transportations that people use. As it is evident from the chart, the majority of people, accounting for more two quarters, use the metro. The next popular ways of moving are trolleybuses and trams. The figures are 75% and 70% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just a few people ride bicycles, only 10%.

soch 001 003

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost ten times more people use the metro than ride bicycles. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 5%, use trolleybuses and trams.

soch 001 004

The chart clearly illustrates that people mostly use mechanical means of transportations. One problem with this is a lack of physical exercise. Although using mechanical transport is fast and comfortable, people do not personally move enough, which can cause some problems with their health. One of the probable solutions to this problem is to ride bicycles more. Thus, cutting down on moving around by public transport and using more bicycles will give one enough physical activities for his or her muscles, and improve their health. другие проблемы >>>>

soch 001 005

To sum up, moving somewhere is an integral part of human life . In my personal opinion, riding bicycles can get people where they want to go. Although it might take more time, it is good cardio training. Also, it will protect people from getting the coronavirus infection because it spreads less in open air.

Read by George William Dole

n01n02n03n04n05n06n07n08n09n10n11n12n13n14n15n16n17n18n19n20

 

 

1

make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1. (Topic sentence, предложение, вводящее в тему)

2. Цель проекта + перефраз

It goes without saying that moving around is a very important part of people’s lives. Moving around provides people with opportunities to feel freedom, to work, and to communicate. The current project focuses on ways people move around.

2

select and report 2–3 main features;

1. Утверждение по теме

2. Комментарий на первую диаграмму

3. Комментарий на диаграмму.

The information provided in this bar chart is about different means of transportations that people use. As it is evident from the chart, the majority of people, accounting for more two quarters, use the metro. The next popular ways of moving are trolleybuses and trams. The figures are 75% and 70% respectively. The chart plainly indicates that just a few people ride bicycles, only 10%.

3

make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1. Сравните крайние величины

2. Сравните близкие величины

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost ten times more (сравнительная конструкция) people use the metro than ride bicycles. Almost the same number of people, with a difference of 5%, use trolleybuses and trams.

4

outline a problem that can arise with the insufficient physical activity in adolescents and suggest the way of solving it;

1. Вводная фраза

2. Обозначьте проблему

3. Обоснуйте проблему

4. Приведите решение

The chart clearly illustrates that people mostly use mechanical means of transportations (George, I mean that they use something that moves them somewhere without work from their side). One problem with this is a lack of physical exercise (проблема). Although using mechanical transport is fast and comfortable, people do not personally move enough, which can cause some problems with their health. One of the probable solutions to this problem is to ride bicycles more (решение проблемы). Thus, cutting down on moving around by public transport and using more bicycles will give one enough physical activities for his or her muscles, and improve their health. (возможный эффект)

5

draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the importance of riding bicycles.

To sum up, moving somewhere is an integral part of human life . In my personal opinion, riding bicycles can get people where they want to go. Although it might take more time, it is good cardio training. Also, it will protect people from getting the coronavirus infection because it spreads less in open air. (дать пояснение, почему я так думаю)

 

 

293 слова.

 


 

Типичные ошибки встречающиеся при написании сочинения с элементами рассуждения

 

 

 

 


 

АВТОР

Igor

igor shavkunov s 
esse edit

Поиск репетитора