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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

Kinds of sports

Popularity

Football

11,2%

Volleyball

10,8%

Basketball

9,8%

Athletics

6,7%

Essay 2022 Sample 14

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Comment on the following statement:

A project on what kinds of sports are popular in Russia.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

— make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

— select and report 2−3 main features;

— make 1−2 comparisons where relevant;

— outline a problem that can arise with popular kinds of sports and suggest the way of solving it;

— draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the importance of sports in human life

 

 

 

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It goes without saying that sports are an integral part of people’s life. I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying  sports activities that people do in Russia. I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to analyze them in my project.

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According to the information provided in the table, the majority of people, accounting for more than a half, like football. I have found out that the next popular sport is volleyball. The figure is 10.8%. It seems surprising to me that few people like athletics, which makes 6.7%.

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Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost two times more people in  Russia like football than those who fancy athletics. Basketball seems less popular than Volleyball. The conducted comparison allows me to assume that athletics is not a favourable activity with people in Russia.

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The table clearly illustrates that people have a wide range of sports activities. However, some problems can arise due to the sports preferred by citizens. One of them is a risk of getting traumas. The possible solution is to be careful playing football or basketball. другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data, I can conclude that football and volleyball are in priority with people. In my opinionsports play a notable role in humans’ life because these activities help people to relax, stay healthy and activeAll in all, sports are good for humans.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

It goes without saying that sports are an integral part of people’s life.

2

(перифраз) 

 

I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying  sports activities that people do in Russia. 

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to analyze them in my project.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

According to the information provided in the table, the majority of people, accounting for more than a half, like football.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

I have found out that the next popular sport is volleyball.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The figure is 10.8%.

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

It seems surprising to me that few people like athletics, which makes 6.7%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost two times more people in  Russia like football than those who fancy athletics.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Basketball seems less popular than Volleyball. 

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The conducted comparison allows me to assume that athletics is not a favourable activity with people in Russia.

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The table clearly illustrates that people have a wide range of sports activities.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise due to the sports preferred by citizens.

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them is a risk of getting traumas. 

4

(решение проблемы)

 

The possible solution is to be careful playing football or basketball.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data, I can conclude that football and volleyball are in priority with people.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinionsports play a notable role in humans’ life because these activities help people to relax, stay healthy and active.

3

(обобщение)

 

All in all, sports are good for humans.

 


 

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