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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

Factors

Number of respondents (%)

KFC

40%

McDonald's

25%

Pizza Hut

15%

Baskin-Robbins

13%

Burger King

7%

 

Essay 2022 Sample 17

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Comment on the following statement:

A project on what fast food restaurants are popular in Zetland.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

  • – make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

    – select and report 2–3 main facts;

    – make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

    – outline a problem that can arise with eating fast food and suggest a way of solving it;

    – conclude by giving your opinion on the role of fast food in our life

 

 

 

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Undoubtly, fast food restaurants are becoming more and more popular nowadays. I am currently working on the project that focuses on studying the popularity of fast food restaurants in Zetland. I have found some relevant data on what fast food restaurants people of Zetland visit and I am going to use them in my project.

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According to the information provided in the table the majority of the residents, accounting for nearly a half, visit KFC. The next popular restaurants to visit is MacDonald’s. The figure is 25% respectivelySurprisingly, the table plainly indicates that very few people go to eat out at Burger King. The figure standsat 7%.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost six times more people go to KFC than to Burger King. Baskin-Robbins seems less popular than Pizza-Hunt.

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The table clearly illustrates that fast food is popular with people in Zetland.However, some problems can arise with eating fast food. One of them is the deterioration of the digestive system. It is a serious problem since frequent meals at fast food restaurants can lead to stomach ulcers, duodenitis or esophagitis. One of the probable solutions to the problem is to cut down on junk food.  другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data in the pie chartit can be concluded that eating in fast food restaurants is an integral partof life in Zetland. In my opinion, fast food plays a notable role in people’s life because not only is it tasty but also it is cheap. Nevertheless, people should limit eating junk food to stay healthy.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtly, fast food restaurants are becoming more and more popular nowadays.

2

(перифраз) 

 

I am currently working on the project that focuses on studying the popularity of fast food restaurants in Zetland. 

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on what fast food restaurants people of Zetland visit and I am going to use them in my project.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

According to the information provided in the table the majority of the residents, accounting for nearly a half, visit KFC. 

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

The next popular restaurants to visit is MacDonald’s.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

 The figure is 25% respectively

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, the table plainly indicates that very few people go to eat out at Burger King. The figure standsat 7%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost six times more people go to KFC than to Burger King. 

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Baskin-Robbins seems less popular than Pizza-Hunt.

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The table clearly illustrates that fast food is popular with people in Zetland.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise with eating fast food.

3

(сама проблема)

 

 One of them is the deterioration of the digestive system. It is a serious problem since frequent meals at fast food restaurants can lead to stomach ulcers, duodenitis or esophagitis. 

4

(решение проблемы)

 

One of the probable solutions to the problem is to cut down on junk food. 

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data in the pie chartit can be concluded that eating in fast food restaurants is an integral partof life in Zetland.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, fast food plays a notable role in people’s life because not only is it tasty but also it is cheap. 

3

(обобщение)

 

Nevertheless, people should limit eating junk food to stay healthy.

 


 

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