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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

Factors

Number of respondents (%)

Smartphones Android

48%

Smartphones iOS

19%

Computers Windows 

15%

Computers iOS

5%

Tabs iOS 

9%

Tabs Android 

4%

 

Essay 2022 Sample 18

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Comment on the following statement:

A project on what electronic devices are popular in Zetland.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

  • – make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

    – select and report 2–3 main facts;

    – make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

    – outline a problem that can arise with using electronic devices and suggest a way of solving it;

    – conclude by giving your opinion on the role of electronic devices in our life

 

 

 

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It goes without saying that electronic devices are widely used nowadays. The purpose of my project is to study different gadgets that are used in Zetland. I have found some relevant data on what electronic gadgets are popular in Zetland and I am going to use them in my project.

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The information provided in the table is about the types of devices people use in Zetland. As it is evident from the pie chart, the majority of the residents, accounting for nearly a half, use Android Smartphones. The figure is 38% respectivelySurprisingly, the table plainly indicates that very few people use tabs android. The figure stands at 4%.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost twice more people use Android than iOS. MacBooks seem less popular than Windows computers. The figures are 5% and 15% accordingly. 

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The table clearly illustrates that gadgets are popular with people in Zetland. However, some problems can arise with using electronic devices. One of them is lack of personal communication. It is a serious problem since people start communicating via their devices more and more, forgetting to visit each other personally. One of the probable solutions to the problem is to start to visit each other more often. другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data in the table, it can be concluded that using devices  is an integral partof life in Zetland. In my opinion, electronic devices play a notable role in people’s life because they help them in all spheres of life. Nevertheless, people should limit using gadgets and communicate face-to-face more.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

It goes without saying that electronic devices are widely used nowadays.

2

(перифраз) 

 

The purpose of my project is to study different gadgets that are used in Zetland. 

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on what electronic gadgets are popular in Zetland and I am going to use them in my project.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

The information provided in the table is about the types of devices people use in Zetland.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

As it is evident from the pie chart, the majority of the residents, accounting for nearly a half, use Android Smartphones.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The figure is 38% respectively

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, the table plainly indicates that very few people use tabs android. The figure stands at 4%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost twice more people use Android than iOS. 

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

MacBooks seem less popular than Windows computers. The figures are 5% and 15% accordingly. 

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The table clearly illustrates that gadgets are popular with people in Zetland.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise with using electronic devices.

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them is lack of personal communication. It is a serious problem since people start communicating via their devices more and more, forgetting to visit each other personally. 

4

(решение проблемы)

 

One of the probable solutions to the problem is to start to visit each other more often. 

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data in the table, it can be concluded that using devices  is an integral partof life in Zetland.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, electronic devices play a notable role in people’s life because they help them in all spheres of life. 

3

(обобщение)

 

Nevertheless, people should limit using gadgets and communicate face-to-face more.

 


 

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