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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on the price of gold.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

  • – make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

    – select and report 2–3 main facts;

    – make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

    – outline a problem that can arise with the price of gold and suggest the way of solving it;

    – draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the importance of gold in human life

 

 

 

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Undoubtly, gold is a very valuable metal in economy of countries. I am currently working on the project which focuses on studyingthe change in the price of gold over a century period. I have found some relevant data on the change in the price of gold over the last ten decades.

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As it is evident from the bar chart, the average price is about $ 500, give or take. These are  1940, 2000 accordingly. There are two jumps of the price higher than $ 1500. The years are1980 and 2020 consequently. Surprisingly, gold was worth less than $500 in 1920 and 1940.

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Comparing the data given in the bar chart, it becomes obvious that the price of gold is eight times higher in 2020 than it was in 1920. The price of gold was almost the same in 1920 and 1940. The figure stands at approximately 300 dollars.

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The bar chart clearly illustrates that it is quite stable to invest in gold as a valuable asset. However, some problems can arisewith the price of gold. One of them, buying gold at a high price in the hope of selling it more expensive later. The possible solution is to analyze the precious metals market and consult with an investment specialist.

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Having analyzed the data in the bar chart, it can be concluded that the price of gold can change over a period. In my opinion, gold plays a significant role in human’s life because it provides a sustainable store of value. All in all, those who trade it should keep their minds cool and do not react on sudden market storms.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtly, gold is a very valuable metal in economy of countries. 

2

(перифраз) 

 

I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the change in the price of gold over a century period.

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on the change in the price of gold over the last ten decades.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

As it is evident from the bar chart, the average price is about $ 500, give or take.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

These are  1940, 2000 accordingly. 

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

There are two jumps of the price higher than $ 1500. The years are1980 and 2020 consequently. 

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, gold was worth less than $500 in 1920 and 1940.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the bar chart, it becomes obvious that the price of gold is eight times higher in 2020 than it was in 1920. 

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

The price of gold was almost the same in 1920 and 1940. The figure stands at approximately 300 dollars.

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The bar chart clearly illustrates that it is quite stable to invest in gold as a valuable asset.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arisewith the price of gold.

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them, buying gold at a high price in the hope of selling it more expensive later.

4

(решение проблемы)

 

The possible solution is to analyze the precious metals market and consult with an investment specialist.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data in the bar chart, it can be concluded that the price of gold can change over a period.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, gold plays a significant role in human’s life because it provides a sustainable store of value. 

3

(обобщение)

 

All in all, those who trade it should keep their minds cool and do not react on sudden market storms.

 


 

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