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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

Factors

Number of respondents (%)

travel cost

40%

safety

26%

close proximity

4%

shopping

8%

sights

22%

 

Essay 2022 Sample 16

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Comment on the following statement:

A project on the main factors affecting the choice of travelling destinations in Zetland.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

  • make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
  • select and report 2-3 facts;
  • make 1-2 comparisons where relevant;
  • outline a problem that can arise with choosing a travelling destination and suggest a way of solving it;
  • conclude by giving your opinion on the most important factors affecting the choice of a travelling destination for young people.

 

 

 

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Undoubtly, choosing a travel destination can be stressful and overwhelming for many people. I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the factors people in Zetland take into consideration when choosing a travel destination. I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to use them in my project.

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According to the information provided in the table, the majority of respondents, accounting for more than one third, choose the destinations considering the cost of travel. The next popular factor is safety. The figure is 26%. Surprisingly, just a few people care about close proximity. The figure stands at 4%.

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Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost four times more citizens in Zetland care about travel costs than those who care about shopping. Sights seem less popular than safety. 

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The table clearly illustrates that travel cost mostly is the main factor for people to choose their destination. However, some problems can arise with a choosing a traveling destination. One of them is a lack of information.One of the probable solutions to the problem is to learn the subject in the Internet.  другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data given in the table, it can be concluded that different factors affect the choice of travel destinations. In my opiniontravel cost plays the most important role in people’s choice because their incomes have decreased and the economical situation worsened. All in all, people should investigate the subject more careful before choosing a trip.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtly, choosing a travel destination can be stressful and overwhelming for many people.

2

(перифраз) 

 

I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the factors people in Zetland take into consideration when choosing a travel destination. 

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to use them in my project. 

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

According to the information provided in the table, the majority of respondents, accounting for more than one third, choose the destinations considering the cost of travel.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

The next popular factor is safety. 

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The figure is 26%. 

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, just a few people care about close proximity. The figure stands at 4%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost four times more citizens in Zetland care about travel costs than those who care about shopping.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Sights seem less popular than safety. 

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The table clearly illustrates that travel cost mostly is the main factor for people to choose their destination. 

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise with a choosing a traveling destination. 

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them is a lack of information.

4

(решение проблемы)

 

One of the probable solutions to the problem is to learn the subject in the Internet. 

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data given in the table, it can be concluded that different factors affect the choice of travel destinations.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opiniontravel cost plays the most important role in people’s choice because their incomes have decreased and the economical situation worsened. 

3

(обобщение)

 

All in all, people should investigate the subject more careful before choosing a trip.

 


 

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