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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on how people in Zetland commute.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

  • – make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

    – select and report 2–3 main facts;

    – make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

    – outline a problem that can arise with transportation in cities;

    – draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the role of public transport in modern life.

 

 

 

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Undoubtly, going to workis an integral part of people’s life. I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the means of transport that Zetland people use to go to their work and come back. I have found some data on how residents of Zetland travel to and from work and I am going to analyze it in my project.

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According to the information provided in the pie chart the majority of residents, accounting for nearly a half, use their own cars.The next popular ways to commute is a walk.The figure is 14%.Surprisingly, the pie chart plainly indicatesthat very few people ride bikes. The figure stands at 2%.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost five times more people use public transport, namely buses, than those who ride bikes. Commuting by underground seems less popular than walking. 

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The pie chart clearly illustrates that transportation system in Zetland is well-developed. However, some problems can arise with going to work by vehicles. One of them is traffic jams. One of the probable solutions to the problem is to build more roads and widen the old ones. другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data in the pie chartit can be concluded that commuting is an integral partof life in Zetland. In my opinion, transport plays a significant role in city life and government should provide proper facilities for its development. Therefore, citizens must demand such help from their authorities and have more active position towards city reconstruction.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtly, going to workis an integral part of people’s life.

2

(перифраз) 

 

 I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the means of transport that Zetland people use to go to their work and come back. 

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some data on how residents of Zetland travel to and from work and I am going to analyze it in my project.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

According to the information provided in the pie chart the majority of residents, accounting for nearly a half, use their own cars.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

The next popular ways to commute is a walk.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The figure is 14%.

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, the pie chart plainly indicatesthat very few people ride bikes. The figure stands at 2%. 

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that almost five times more people use public transport, namely buses, than those who ride bikes.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Commuting by underground seems less popular than walking. 

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The pie chart clearly illustrates that transportation system in Zetland is well-developed.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise with going to work by vehicles. 

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them is traffic jams.

4

(решение проблемы)

 

One of the probable solutions to the problem is to build more roads and widen the old ones.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data in the pie chartit can be concluded that commuting is an integral partof life in Zetland.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, transport plays a significant role in city life and government should provide proper facilities for its development. 

3

(обобщение)

 

Therefore, citizens must demand such help from their authorities and have more active position towards city reconstruction.

 


 

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