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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

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Comment on the following statement:

Project on the number of countries participating in the Summer Olympics.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

  • – make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

    – select and report 2–3 main facts;

    – make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

    – outline a problem that can arise with the countries' participation in the Olympics and suggest the way of solving it;

    – raw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the importance of Olympics participation

 

 

 

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Undoubtly, participating in the Olympics has always been important for many countries. I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the growth in number of countries that take took part in the summer Olympics over a particular periodI have found some relevant data on how the number of Olympic participants changed.

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The information provided in the bar chart is about the change in the number of countries that participated in Olympic games over 32 years. As it is evident from the bar chart, the average number of Olympic participants was growing from year to year. In 2000 almost half of the countries participated in the Olympics. Surprisingly, only 10 countries took part in the Olympics in 1984.

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Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that average growth of participants increased about 3 % a year. Especially high acceleration happened every 8 years till 2000, which makes about 100 %. From 1984 to 2016 the amount of participants in Olympic games grew 8 times.

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The bar chart clearly illustrates that the popularity of the summer Olympics was on a constant increase over 32 years. However, some problems can arise with taking part in these games. One of them is very high entrance fee. The possible solution is to set different rates for different countries. другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data in the bar chartit can be concluded that number of Olympic participants is growing over the period. In my opinion, Olympic games play a significant role in people’s life because they inspire people to do sports and lead a healthy life. All in all, Olympics popularity is increasing and the entrance should be free.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtly, participating in the Olympics has always been important for many countries.

2

(перифраз) 

 

I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying the growth in number of countries that take took part in the summer Olympics over a particular period.

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on how the number of Olympic participants changed.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

The information provided in the bar chart is about the change in the number of countries that participated in Olympic games over 32 years.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

As it is evident from the bar chart, the average number of Olympic participants was growing from year to year.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

In 2000 almost half of the countries participated in the Olympics. 

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

Surprisingly, only 10 countries took part in the Olympics in 1984.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the diagram, it becomes obvious that average growth of participants increased about 3 % a year.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Especially high acceleration happened every 8 years till 2000, which makes about 100 %. From 1984 to 2016 the amount of participants in Olympic games grew 8 times.

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The bar chart clearly illustrates that the popularity of the summer Olympics was on a constant increase over 32 years.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise with taking part in these games. 

3

(сама проблема)

 

One of them is very high entrance fee. 

4

(решение проблемы)

 

The possible solution is to set different rates for different countries.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data in the bar chartit can be concluded that number of Olympic participants is growing over the period.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, Olympic games play a significant role in people’s life because they inspire people to do sports and lead a healthy life. 

3

(обобщение)

 

All in all, Olympics popularity is increasing and the entrance should be free.

 


 

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