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Imagine that you are doing a project on what pets people prefer to keep. You have collected some data on the subject (see the diagram below). Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.

 

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Essay 2022 Sample 13

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Comment on the following statement:

A project on transport preference in Japan.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:

— make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

— select and report 2−3 main features;

— make 1−2 comparisons where relevant;

— outline a problem that can arise with different kinds of transport and suggest the way of solving it;

— draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the importance of transport in human life.

 

 

 

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Undoubtedly, transport is an important part of people’s life. I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying kinds of transport that people prefer in Japan. I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to analyze them in my project.

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According to the information provided in the pie chart, the majority of people, accounting for a little less than a half, prefer trains. I have found out that the next popular transport is cars. The figure is 19 %. It seems surprising to me that few people like motorbikes, which makes 3%.

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Comparing the data given in the pie chart, it becomes obvious that almost eight times more people in Japan prefer trains than those who choose walking. Busses seem less popular than cars. The conducted comparison allows me to assume that bicycles are not a favourable means of transportation with people in Japan.

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The pie chart clearly illustrates that people have a wide range of transport preferences in Japan. However, some problems can arise due to the means of transportation preferred by citizens. One of them is air pollution. The possible solution is to turn all the vehicles into electric ones. другие проблемы >>>>

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Having analyzed the data, I can conclude that trains and cars are in priority with people in Japan. In my opinion, transport plays a notable role in humans’ life because it helps people to commute to work, move faster and save a lot of time. All in all, vehicles are good for humans’ life.

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– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

 

Undoubtedly, transport is an important part of people’s life.

2

(перифраз) 

 

I am currently working on the project which focuses on studying kinds of transport that people prefer in Japan.

3

(разъяснение)

 

I have found some relevant data on the subject and I am going to analyze them in my project.

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

 

According to the information provided in the pie chart, the majority of people, accounting for a little less than a half, prefer trains.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

I have found out that the next popular transport is cars.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The figure is 19 %. 

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

 

It seems surprising to me that few people like motorbikes, which makes 3%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

 

Comparing the data given in the pie chart, it becomes obvious that almost eight times more people in Japan prefer trains than those who choose walking.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Busses seem less popular than cars. 

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

The conducted comparison allows me to assume that bicycles are not a favourable means of transportation with people in Japan.

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

 

The pie chart clearly illustrates that people have a wide range of transport preferences in Japan.

2

(вводное предложение)

However, some problems can arise due to the means of transportation preferred by citizens.

3

(сама проблема)

 

 One of them is air pollution. 

4

(решение проблемы)

 

The possible solution is to turn all the vehicles into electric ones.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

 

Having analyzed the data, I can conclude that trains and cars are in priority with people in Japan.

2

 

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

 

In my opinion, transport plays a notable role in humans’ life because it helps people to commute to work, move faster and save a lot of time. 

3

(обобщение)

 

All in all, vehicles are good for humans’ life.

 


 

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